Lengthening Poem by Indira Renganathan

Lengthening

Rating: 4.5


'You make me
Always too short
So to look
Uninteresting'

I said 'look,
I'm also short
In heart with
Good content
No one mocks
At my height'

Insist you,
Then I'll have
To add a
Tail piece only
You'll look
More a monkey'

'You're
short and cute
Like a hummingbird
All adorable
Remarks you get now
Better be like this'

A while of silence
Took to get convinced
My short poem

Friday, August 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Kumar Ek 28 September 2020

Indira, Your poems are Hummingbirds Short and cute.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 August 2020

'You're short and cute Like a hummingbird All adorable It is, indeed, an adorable poem, dear Ma'm...............10 Thanks a million for commenting on my POD...... :)

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 August 2020

A while of silence Took to get convinced My short poem.....superb; wisdom of this poem; short and cute like a hummingbird in this poetic expression; love this piece

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2020

If the height is short, it does not matter. We have to make taller personality with trust towards God. In silence we feel the truth. Your short poem has greater value. We realize this truth. Beauty it carries in hope and attitude. This is an excellent poem...10

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