cracked, broken all alone
through the years i have grown
to become catious, cold as ice
never again to hurt me twice
quiet, lonely, and concerned
ask me now what i have learned
we all have to be through the pain
if not, nothing will we have gained
Your poem is short and concise and beautifully describes your thoughts of the moment. I liked the rhyme too. Well done!
i love the rhymes and the words that you chosen make it perfect worderful
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The sentiments in this poem are the other side of things. This is not the celebratory approach to relationships or the optimism about achieving a lasting rapport. I think one of the benefits of writing poems like MY DARK PRINCE is that they build up an imaginative defense against the depths of a poem like this one. You are being honest to yourself in this one, but you don't want to sink as low here as you rose high in the other type of poem.