My Beautiful One Poem by Cynthia Carpenter

Cynthia Carpenter

jacksonville, flordia

My Beautiful One

Rating: 4.8


My beautiful princess you rescued me
You captured the darkness and set me free
I never knew loving you would be so great
Falling for you has become my fate
Let us go to this new world of ours
To lay together underneath the stars
To love one another forever
As long as our hearts are together
My lovely one you stole my heart
I’ve loved you from the beginning from the start

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhavna Singh 16 January 2014

very beautiful poetry

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Daniel Brick 04 September 2014

As a series of statements these ten lines add up to a convincing expression of a love affair already moving ahead with considerable speed. And there's movement in the nature of the love implied in two lines I like FALLING FOR YOU HAS BECOME MY FATE / LET'S GO TO THIS NEW WORLD OF OURS. This is a threshold moment, and crossing it together will be mutually enriching. Wonders await both of you! .

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Khairul Ahsan 07 August 2014

Nice thoughts of love, and nice rhyme too.

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Barbara Nixon 04 February 2014

Beautiful poem, heartfelt and emotional.10+

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Gary H 18 January 2014

This is so good, loving as the other people had already said.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 16 January 2014

very nice love feelings...............short and sweet.................

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Cynthia Carpenter

jacksonville, flordia
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