My Dark Prince Poem by Cynthia Carpenter

Cynthia Carpenter

jacksonville, flordia

My Dark Prince

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you brought me out, you healed my pain
but to you there wasnt anything to gain
you did it out of the goodness of your heart
somehow i knew you were the one from the start
you had me from our first little talk
100 miles for you i would walk
my dark prince you resqued me
you pushed away the darnkness and set me free
only to capture and steal my love
maybe it was destined from above
that one day we would meet and finally be together
my dark prince i'll love you forever
as long as you hold my hand through my worst fears
hold me in your arms as i cry my tears
be there for me when i need you the most
at the center of my heart you stood your post
promised to love me for all eternity
come my dark prince and let us be
together forever until we die
together we will be joined in the sky

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 04 September 2014

LET US BE TOGETHER UNTIL WE DIE TOGETHER WE WILL BE JOINED IN THE SKY - there is a wonderful expansion of their love in these lines. First it will last until death - that means life long renewal - and their love has a cosmic dimension. These are larger-than-life emotions which take love to a higher plane where (for example) the divorce statistics in the USA are irrelevant. And addressing the beloved as MY DARK PRINCE adds to this gratitude that makes this love untouched by ordinary setbacks and diminishing returns. Long may it prosper!

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Chinedu Dike 18 September 2014

Lovely poem from the heart. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 June 2016

You healed my pain! ! Love and care. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Joseph Harlacher 29 June 2016

not dark at all nice work

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Kim Barney 29 June 2016

Very pleasing poem. Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2016

Very interesting and amazing poem shared definitely. Having love for dark prince is definitely precious.10

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Rajnish Manga 29 June 2016

Lovely articulation and expression of feelings about one who brought love in your life. Thanks. ....my dark prince you resqued me ....you pushed away the darnkness and set me free ....only to capture and steal my love

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M Asim Nehal 29 June 2016

Excellent poem, inspiring and soothing. Congrats for the poem of the day.

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Joseph Harlacher 29 June 2016

the light we see by is but shadows to truth & love for life while alive.

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M Asim Nehal 29 June 2016

I agree

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Cynthia Carpenter

jacksonville, flordia
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