Let Everyday Be Monday Poem by Bilal Raja

The ires and ions of life...ended in silence, a destruction or a virtuous action...Pretty nice poem...10

I like the way this is constructed and I think its a solid piece, and well written. Just enough of all of the elements needed. Meter, rhyme and so on. I dont think the title does it justice but I like the poem.

Very clever rhyming, telling the story one word at a time. Well thought out!

that was a great poem! a true masterpiece....if you have time, have a look at my poem 'when pyramids crumble'

pretty good job a1o! ...

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