Bilal Raja

Rookie (28/04/89 / Leicester)

Let Everyday Be Monday - Poem by Bilal Raja

Care
Desire
Flare
Fire
Smiles
Laughter
Forever
After?
Emotion
Pain
Heartache
Strain
Love
Hate
Everything’s
Fake
Insecurities
Delusion
Fear
Confusion
Obsession
Violence
Depress ion
Silence.


Comments about Let Everyday Be Monday by Bilal Raja

  • C Richard Miles (1/22/2009 11:46:00 AM)

    Very clever rhyming, telling the story one word at a time. Well thought out! (Report)Reply

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  • Nithya Raghavan (1/22/2009 6:49:00 AM)

    that was a great poem!
    a true masterpiece....if you have time, have a look at my poem 'when pyramids crumble'
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  • Jose Murguia (1/18/2009 5:19:00 PM)

    pretty good job a1o! ... (Report)Reply

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  • Brianna Trombley (1/17/2009 10:17:00 PM)

    you blow me away, i seem to like all your poems, you have a way with words, all those emotions and feelings tho seem to balance out, nice piece (Report)Reply

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  • Emily Sleator *His Babey* (1/17/2009 6:39:00 PM)

    hate mondays dont u? ? ? ? ? ? ? but every week there has to be at least one bloody monday rite? ? ? ? (Report)Reply

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (1/17/2009 6:22:00 PM)

    beautiful floor. you have skillz.. check out my piece called essence (Report)Reply

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  • Catrina Heart (1/17/2009 2:13:00 PM)

    The ires and ions of life...ended in silence, a destruction or a virtuous action...Pretty nice poem...10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 17, 2009



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