Let Everyday Be Monday Poem by Bilal Raja

Let Everyday Be Monday

Rating: 3.9


Care
Desire
Flare
Fire
Smiles
Laughter
Forever
After?
Emotion
Pain
Heartache
Strain
Love
Hate
Everything’s
Fake
Insecurities
Delusion
Fear
Confusion
Obsession
Violence
Depression
Silence.

Saturday, January 17, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion,depression,obsession
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C Richard Miles 22 January 2009

Very clever rhyming, telling the story one word at a time. Well thought out!

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Nithya Raghavan 22 January 2009

that was a great poem! a true masterpiece....if you have time, have a look at my poem 'when pyramids crumble'

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Jose Murguia 18 January 2009

pretty good job a1o! ...

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beautiful floor. you have skillz.. check out my piece called essence

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Catrina Heart 17 January 2009

The ires and ions of life...ended in silence, a destruction or a virtuous action...Pretty nice poem...10

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