You have done all that you can
Given your everything
Gone without
Yet it never seems to be enough
You are wash out
Worn
Time left on the planet
Is minimal
You now just want to cherish
Every minute of life
You have really
Gone without
You want to be rewarded
In health
For the good
The gifts you have given
May God
Let it be
Copyright Reserved August 2017
Lyn Paul
A lovely supplications poem showing the strife of life and the wish to be rewarded. Yes May God let the best happen. Lovely to read from your sweet appealing muse. Thumbs up, warmest wishes and don't forget to 'take care'
Beautiful poem giving us all hope. Past is gone, present to be cherished as its just the bonus of life we get. Loved reading it from your pen Lyn. Keep writing.
Hope for a brighter future after struggles in the past. I hope you get your reward Lyn.
I dont know when i read this i feel pain that you tried to keep it recovered and heal, i feel the pain of the bruises and i see hope and faith for better future and God is the one that keep us strong, it is a heartfelt poem..let it be Lyn, be better day after day, we should....and also, wonderful photo :) what a fantastic sunset picture!
You now just want to cherish every minute of life.Nice flow of thoughts.Thanks for sharing.
Nice hopeful poem...let it be is a fit ending. Thanks for sharing Lyn.
'You want to be rewarded In health For the good The gifts you have given - Yes Lyn, 'let it be'! Oh God, 'let it be'! The poem touched me, and thank you for the brilliant graphic you posted with the poem. That's eye soothing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What has gone let it be gone but look at the present and have immense hope. This is a beautiful poem on hope with stunning expression. I appreciate this. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided. Thanks for sharing.