Let It Be Poem by Lyn Paul

Let It Be

Rating: 4.8


You have done all that you can
Given your everything
Gone without
Yet it never seems to be enough

You are wash out
Worn
Time left on the planet
Is minimal

You now just want to cherish
Every minute of life
You have really
Gone without
You want to be rewarded
In health
For the good
The gifts you have given

May God
Let it be


Copyright Reserved August 2017
Lyn Paul

Let It Be
Saturday, August 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,survival
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 August 2017

What has gone let it be gone but look at the present and have immense hope. This is a beautiful poem on hope with stunning expression. I appreciate this. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided. Thanks for sharing.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 September 2017

A lovely supplications poem showing the strife of life and the wish to be rewarded. Yes May God let the best happen. Lovely to read from your sweet appealing muse. Thumbs up, warmest wishes and don't forget to 'take care'

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Hans Vr 08 August 2017

Touching an lovely poem. Worn out body, bright soul!

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Bill Galvin 09 August 2017

Very nice, Lyn... thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 September 2017

Beautiful poem giving us all hope. Past is gone, present to be cherished as its just the bonus of life we get. Loved reading it from your pen Lyn. Keep writing.

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Jennifer Birchall 07 March 2019

Hope for a brighter future after struggles in the past. I hope you get your reward Lyn.

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Unwritten Soul 01 April 2018

I dont know when i read this i feel pain that you tried to keep it recovered and heal, i feel the pain of the bruises and i see hope and faith for better future and God is the one that keep us strong, it is a heartfelt poem..let it be Lyn, be better day after day, we should....and also, wonderful photo :) what a fantastic sunset picture!

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Binayakumar Mohanty 09 November 2017

You now just want to cherish every minute of life.Nice flow of thoughts.Thanks for sharing.

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Jette Blackstone 01 November 2017

Nice hopeful poem...let it be is a fit ending. Thanks for sharing Lyn.

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Khairul Ahsan 28 October 2017

'You want to be rewarded In health For the good The gifts you have given - Yes Lyn, 'let it be'! Oh God, 'let it be'! The poem touched me, and thank you for the brilliant graphic you posted with the poem. That's eye soothing!

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