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Let Me Love You

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You keep my light burning bright
Even in my darkest night.

You have me safe in your arms,
Now there is nothing I fear

I ceased breathing
The moment I beheld you.

The words that you once gave me
Keep my breath going on forever.
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Dain Greathouse 20 August 2013
This is a beautiful and heartfelt poem.
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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 13 August 2013
great poem You keep my light burning bright Even in my darkest night. you pur alot hope and emotions here really love it
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Khairul Ahsan 10 August 2013
A nice poem of love.
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Arabella Picken 23 July 2013
This is great. the fact English is not your first language makes it even better
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Jessica Roberts 23 July 2013
this is a very well written poem and i love the way it is written
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Khairul Ahsan 06 July 2013
For a teen age girl whose mother tongue is not English, this poem is well written. The free flow of thoughts about love is remarkable. Keep writing, Emily.
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Kelly Seale 24 November 2012
Emily Angel...one word can sum up my thoughs on this piece...Beautiful! You have a gift for such beauty within your heart, within your words... and touching others with is gift... is priceless! Beautifully Written! ; -) -Kelly.
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Ray Quesada 04 November 2012
someone here has mentioned that your poem sounds cliche, and i agree, but i have something more to say about this - first, you are young, and Love is usually the inner theme of life for all young people. So i can't blame you for writing about love, and it's nice that you express it in a poem, rather than just say, I love you to the person you're writing about - I have read a lot of my old poems from when i was 18 and i thought them so terribly childish that i just put them in a box, never to be read by anyone again - this isn't a bad poem for someone your age, but you will write more, get older, find your voice, and in ten years you will have advanced so much that when you re-read this it will seem very novice to you - if you read poets like Teasdale and Neruda, you will get an idea of how to write a good love poem without it sounding cliche - and even Teasdale with all her brilliance still made the same mistake sometimes - that all said, thanks for sharing your work with everyone!
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I luv d feelin in dis poem
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 14 October 2011
at your age, so young, your poems express honesty. you share thoughts truthfully
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