Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 6,772 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Let Me Not Your Heart E`er Break - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Oh let me not your heart e`er break
Nor yet your joy to steal
For I would not your love forsake
Nor mine own heart conceal

If in my palm I held your soul
Tight-closed my hand would be
Then I would e`er your life extol
And keep you safe with me

My love will dance upon your heart
To bring you sweet delight
From you I ne`er will ever part
Nor free you from my sight

Forever you will be my love
Until all time shall cease
Together `neath the stars above
And after death`s release


Comments about Let Me Not Your Heart E`er Break by Valerie Dohren

  • John Brown (8/28/2012 10:16:00 AM)


    Very beautiful words indeed Valerie. I enjoyed this very much. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/4/2012 4:20:00 PM)


    A truly love poem; we human creatures are most mystical and eloquent when caught in the emotion of love. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (5/1/2012 8:04:00 AM)


    My love will dance upon your heart
    To bring you sweet delight
    From you I ne`er will ever part
    Nor free you from my sight

    very sweet. mind blowing.
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  • Zoya Khalid (4/27/2012 12:23:00 PM)


    Touching....................really beautiful... (Report) Reply

  • Micmac Mccrory (4/25/2012 3:07:00 PM)


    There is something in the air; all the poets are writing love poems.
    This is a perfect love poem a great write.
    Inspiring! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    Micmac
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  • (4/24/2012 2:03:00 PM)


    True love is not only difficult to come by in this life, but is much more difficult to write a perfect poem on, sounds as if you have accomplished both..... (Report) Reply

  • (4/24/2012 11:59:00 AM)


    Flow gently (Sweet Afton) -just a beauty.Not just another love poem but the real McCoy. Poignant and tenderly
    melodious
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  • (4/23/2012 1:07:00 PM)


    A really wonderful and beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Juan Olivarez (4/23/2012 11:53:00 AM)


    That is one lovely poem, great rhyme and meter. Excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (4/21/2012 6:16:00 PM)


    A sweet and gentle song. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (4/21/2012 5:07:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem, such a pleasure to to read, (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2012 8:49:00 AM)


    A fine love poem in an old romantic style beautifully crafted. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 21, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 21, 2012


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