Let Them Rest In Peace Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Let Them Rest In Peace

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If there be pothole
In a sidewalk of road,
Place on it a commode
And make it a SH! T-HOLE,
For, authorities all—
Municipal we call
Deeply are asleep,
So, let them RIP.
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The accompanying picture taken from Bangalore Mirror shows a pothole in a busy area called ST Bed Koramangala. To wake the Municipal Corporation from its deep slumber, someone placed a commode in the pothole.
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Happenings |10.10.2019|
Topic: humour

Let Them Rest In Peace
Wednesday, October 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: humour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 October 2019

very SILENTLY CREATIVE YOU NOT READING I UNHAPPY I'M HOING WHEN YOU SMILE ON MY PAGE I AM HOPPING KHUSSHEEE KHUSHHEEE GI AP SIR YOU ARE MY WONDER

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

First, thanks for the good words. Second, my impatience always walks a few steps ahead of me. And hence when PH comes out with the notice that the page is not traceable, or does not react on entries made, my impatience declaRES REBELLION. (tHIS CAPITALS ARE UNINTENTIONAL) .

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Bharati Nayak 31 October 2019

A humourous write bringing into notice the utter carelessness of Municipal authorities. They are not waking up even as so many accidents happen due to open potholes.Recently a threeyear child died by falling into an open borewell.This is India.Here shifting resposibility is so easy. Thank you Sir Aniruddha Pathak for this timely write.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

Thank you Bharatiji, your sentiments are right in place. The public anger on such passivity seems to have not helped. Let us hope, such humourous interventions would work.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 October 2019

Ha ha ha What an amazingly humorous write. A clever technique to prevent falls on such scary pothole. An excellent write, Sir. Brilliantly penned. Loved. reading it.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

Thank you indeed, i was half expecting some brickbats, . It's good if some expectations are not fulfilled.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2019

For, authorities all— Municipal we call Deeply are asleep, So, let them RIP........so haunting. Beautiful Limerick with fun and humor. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

Thank you dear KM for visiting and liking this ditty

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