Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 27,986 Points (18 October 1964)

Let Us Be Afloat - Poem by Aufie Zophy

Let us be a boat
On the giant sea of greed
Saving souls to love

Topic(s) of this poem: boat, greed, love

Form: Senryu

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The world needs the wisdom
that love brings happiness
and greed brings only misery

Comments about Let Us Be Afloat by Aufie Zophy

  • Nosheen IrfanNosheen Irfan (6/11/2019 7:01:00 AM)

    Yes, indeed we need to save the humans from falling into the abyss of greed and selfishness. We must promote love. A succinct gem of a piece. (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (6/6/2019 9:53:00 PM)

    Amen! A tiny poem rooting for a life devoid of greed and full of righteousness.
    Thanks a lot for sharing, A-Z.

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (6/6/2019 9:01:00 PM)

    To float along! !
    Saving souls of love.

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 6, 2019

Poem Edited: Friday, June 7, 2019

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