Let Us Forget Poem by Sathya Narayana

good work again sir.. ric Dhodi

Oh, this is easy to read and understand, the whole piece is arranged in good order, the ideas are obviously right...yes, everybody doesn't look back when there's something is causing you upset, the whole piece I like the sentence: 'To keep people in a hypnotic state.' which is a main point to be followed by us. thank you I offer this with 10 full marks.

outstanding work 10+++++

Touchy and I relate to and a great way to allow others to understand.One of the best way to give courage.

A very nice poem, touchy imagery. Like it.

Your penchant for loading poetry with meaning and tropes is manifest here. More grace, Sir.

This is a wonderfully executed political piece, man! The repetition of the forgotten elements of repression, the willingness of the beaten to adore the one dishing out the abuse worked well. Like a battered wife, excuses and denials abound because the mind is forced to splinter the truth in order to survive. To finish with the irony of voting was a nice touch, as if two handpicked elite candidates are going to make a difference! The illusion of democracy is often enough to make the flag-wavers froth at the mouth with patriotic fervor. I enjoyed this a great deal!

well done..............

corruption begets more corruption which we tend to forget for some paltry benefit we can see an touch. PRomises are poor currency

thats the price for democracy regards anjali