Rafique Farooqi

Freshman - 638 Points (Date of birth 22 April 1959 / Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur)

! Let Us Join - Poem by Rafique Farooqi

just come,
and color my sleeps,
with dreams,
sun rays,
and laser beams,
and never shatter,
whatever may be matter.
you are sweet,
like a heartbeat,
and stay with me,
in a dreamy island,
with breezes,
and sunflowers,
for long lasting,
this blue sky,
this blue sea,
is ours,
these clouds,
these rains,
all types of pain,
our success,
any strain,
any good,
or bad weather,
will be taken,

Comments about ! Let Us Join by Rafique Farooqi

  • Rahman Henry (9/5/2015 5:50:00 AM)

    Soft and sweet poem. Lovely to love. (Report) Reply

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  • Ramesh T A (9/5/2015 12:28:00 AM)

    Dream full of joy and living in dream island with the loving being is nicely written in this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/4/2014 1:21:00 AM)

    What a beautiful poem! It really touched my heart. (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (2/3/2010 2:26:00 AM)

    words well said.... nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/20/2009 8:47:00 PM)

    you are sweet,
    like a heartbeat,
    and stay with me,
    in a dreamy island,
    with breezes,
    and sunflowers, we must always dream sweet andaskalmighty tofulfill it.. lovely poemtobe read.....10

    read mine... death....reality.
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/13/2009 1:57:00 PM)

    A peom full of sweet dreams and innocent wishes; sadly life is not so sweet. (Report) Reply

  • (12/13/2009 6:41:00 AM)

    the theme.......togetherness, , pain...so nice...so pretty, , i like this...actually i smiled, , , i like this for its simple poetic well arranged dramatic piece...sweet and elegant as everybody sees this page... (Report) Reply

  • (12/12/2009 7:38:00 AM)

    Lovely imagery here Rafique...the first two lines, divinely romantic, as is the whole poem.

    Thanks for reminding me of how it is, when united in loving.

    Smiling at you

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  • (12/12/2009 7:22:00 AM)

    gud one dear......................keep writing.... (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/12/2009 6:45:00 AM)

    very imaginative! well written/penned! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 12, 2009

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