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just come,
and color my sleeps,
with dreams,
sun rays,
and laser beams,
and never shatter,
whatever may be matter.
anyway
you are sweet,
like a heartbeat,
and stay with me,
in a dreamy island,
with breezes,
and sunflowers,
for long lasting,
hours,
this blue sky,
this blue sea,
is ours,
these clouds,
these rains,
joys,
happiness,
all types of pain,
our success,
vain,
any strain,
any good,
or bad weather,
will be taken,
together

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 December 2009

you are sweet, like a heartbeat, and stay with me, in a dreamy island, with breezes, and sunflowers, we must always dream sweet andaskalmighty tofulfill it.. lovely poemtobe read.....10 read mine... death....reality.

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Rehana Nazli 13 December 2009

A peom full of sweet dreams and innocent wishes; sadly life is not so sweet.

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Lady Grace 13 December 2009

the theme.......togetherness, , pain...so nice...so pretty, , i like this...actually i smiled, , , i like this for its simple poetic well arranged dramatic piece...sweet and elegant as everybody sees this page...

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Tai Chi Italy 12 December 2009

Lovely imagery here Rafique...the first two lines, divinely romantic, as is the whole poem. Thanks for reminding me of how it is, when united in loving. Smiling at you Tai

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Lost Poet 12 December 2009

gud one dear......................keep writing....

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shaharyar 10 November 2020

great Dr sb well said great words

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Rahman Henry 05 September 2015

Soft and sweet poem. Lovely to love.

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Ramesh T A 05 September 2015

Dream full of joy and living in dream island with the loving being is nicely written in this poem!

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Akhtar Jawad 04 August 2014

What a beautiful poem! It really touched my heart.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 February 2010

words well said.... nice poem!

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