Let Words Flow - Not.... Blow Poem by me poet yeps poet

Let Words Flow - Not.... Blow

Rating: 5.0


When the sword is out
of the scabbard
and
spoken words leave your mouth

when stars wink
and
clouds sink

then thunder
comes in
the blunder
is done

now there is no fun
spirit has been spat

rats kicked
killed on the mat

you fall and fall
like autumn leaves
on the greens

but then that speaks
of the end
one can never amend

But some guys
speak with sense
many mostly unknowingly
say non -sense

then comes drenching rain
washes everything down the drain

what of PPME
of you all too
nothingremains

life flows out of veins
your red blood like
bloody muddyslushy
rain
again and again
alas life goes in
vain

Tuesday, October 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,poetic expression,rain,words
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
take care guys
don't tell lies
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidya Murali 13 October 2020

when stars wink and clouds sink then thunder comes in the blunder is done I enjoyed the power of these lines. The power of words are wonderfully penned. Very nice work. Thanks a lot for your comments too.

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Richard Wlodarski 13 October 2020

Excellent poem. The catchy title had immediately caught mine attention. The sword and rain metaphors are brilliant for this theme. Finally, someone has written a truly meaningful poem about some of the nonsense that's happening on PH. Bravo, Sir!

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Varsha M 13 October 2020

Now this is something very sensible. Thanks... take care guys don't tell lies....true words.

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Kostas Lagos 13 October 2020

I like this one! 5 stars!

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