Lethal Routine Poem by merna ibrahim

Lethal Routine

Rating: 4.5


Why is the life like that?
It has no taste..

Everything goes bad and everyday is like the day before
As if we are doing copy and paste

The daily routine is killing us.
It doesn't want to go away. It is a massive cuss.

We are trying to change our boring life.
But we failed in changing this jive.

Everyone wants to cry.
Everyone wants to die.

I am asking God to spread the hope in our hearts
And make this feeling quickly departs.

We need the hope
we need to cope

We need the help from God
before the patience rope be cut

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C.R. Clark 10 June 2009

A very insightful poem, Merna. I suspect that we all need to be infused with new 'spice' in our life from time to time. Of course, if we never tasted 'bland', how could we truly appreciate 'spice? ' Excellent poem! Richard

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Liz Williams 04 May 2009

amazing with amazing on top

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Honest Heart 21 April 2009

WOW! ! ! ...GREAT POEM...I loved it a looooooooooot....this kind of poems is my favourite kind...keeeeeeeeep writing my dear :) :) :)

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~ Jon London ~ 20 April 2009

In darkness we reach out through the echoes of depresive thoughts, we touch the light but only by turning to feel its heavenly glow. Thanks for the share my friend

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Muhammad Ali 20 April 2009

It is so nice that in our depressions we look at God....... and more nice when we look at God with confidence! Honest work dear friend and keep it up! !

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We need the hope we need to cope We need the help from God before the patience rope be cut....we need his blessing for all the purpose to make our life beautiful n energetic....10

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lovely lines but don't be negative... life without Hope is nothing! ! ! ! keep your Hope alive!

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Ahmed Abdalla 30 October 2009

love this poem. you have talent :)

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Kuji Soliman 16 August 2009

I love it! ! ! i think noone could ever express this much feeling in a poem more than u did in this poem! ! thanks for sharing

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 16 June 2009

everyone want to cry everyone want to die..................hmm, Merna You have realized some truth of life............but it is not an eternal truth..............life also has bliss in it's kitty, though difficult to find but not impossible..............a good work......keep it up.............

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