Let's Make Love Tonight Poem by Marieta Maglas

So much passion in so few words... Wow....

‘…were we will subsist for being eternal..’ Splendid ‘touch-down’ in the fathomless chasm of entirety and eternity… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to my page with your graceful comments and criticism too welcomed… [Why hack my she &c] niv

what happens while the act! nicely penned! 10

From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick

I procrastinate such harsh realities

A amazing poem. You made the reader believe every word. Thank you Marieta for sharing the amazing poetry.

Your poem's title is as nude as rainwater, and the lines that follow offer evidence that your conceptual expectations are bursting with transformative fertility.

I like this poem, it has a dark undertone that I can appreciate. To become one single corpse is a great line and image.

love making so free so full of all that one is...passion...blowing forward...sideways...up..down..stop! ...is not a command...hands move about...knowning not where...what a dare...how care-free is that...you have woke in me...my dreams...dreamt.

Hi Mari - This is beautiful - so gentle and yet so emotive - this is how cerebral (dream) love really works. 'One eternal emotion of dream' a beautiful 'coming together' of lovers - separated by distance but locked together in passion.. Thank you for sharing your thoughts in such an elegant way. It scores a MAX with me! Love you in poetry - JOHN X