If I had met You
from the beginning,
maybe I would have never suffered
a long defeat
to become a ruin.
I would have searched for
a solution to change my life.
Even so, no one could stop me
from reaching the Light.
So much I needed you, Jesus.
I have climbed my inner mountain
to be with You.
I have no courage
to abandon Your way.
I don't want to fall again.
I tried to have a positive attitude and
to achieve the right mindset.
I tried to be a new, wise person.
I felt deeply inside that
You could completely awaken me.
I felt Your love,
and I understood Your teachings.
I understand that
only through Your Divinity
I can reach Heaven.
This love, I feel inside for You,
is a proof of Your existence.
You are eternal.
I want to survive
For being with You.
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He is always their all through our life. Only we should open up truly to find his sign. Nice write.
very beautiful and meaningful...for only in you...i love that phrase....and one thing about Jesus....unlike the simple man that leaves when things are not right or his way...Jesus will never leave you he is always with you no matter how hurt or how grey the time may be....only you can leave Jesus..He is with you to stay.. ~^..^
The search for identity in this life time, short life time, is as beautiful or as evil as we make.... and this is beautifully expressed.
wonderful poem madam.. you have penned it so well.. every emotion brought out is so pure.. 10+++ regards prashant
Hi, Marieta! Aware of you now from your comment on my poem, I’m exploring your poetry. On this one I relate to the opening sentence. I tend to think now, though, that all of us need to experience a ruin, a desperation, to get serious with God. Yes, love is the best proof of God’s existence. Like the wind which is itself invisible, we can see love’s effects. -Glen
Powerful transformational perspective! Well done my friend.
Excellent innwr view and a great message to the blind present world,10+
Excellent innwr view and a great message to the blind present world,10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very sweet. It has a good emotional touch. It also has humanistic value in a way and also an intellectual appeal IN A WAY.