Liar Poem by Abdul Wahab

Liar

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Look at the distance stands the liar
He killed the truth by setting a fire
He has every thing but the honour.

His soul's chastity is a dampen dull
Check his breaths giving the smell foul.
As the soul has been badly rotten
So it becomes the body's burden.
His morality is a hostage and lousily bitten
He wanted each and every battle to win
So he always plays with the cursing sin

He is actually a coward can't face the fact
He doesn't have any integrity or self respect
He lacks the logic and can't stand straight
To fight the battle of life, he adopts a trick
To suck the blood of beauty like a tick
He licks the fire and gives the life a kick
He embraces the hell like a foolish freak.


Look at the distance stands the liar
He is the murderer of the satin flower
From the mouth he emits the fire
And he sets ablaze the silver dollar.

He brings a shame to the humanity
In the society he welcomes the anarchy
To beget the dishonesty and to kill the purity
Heavenly he is a curse on peace
A big blot, an obstacle to the justice.

Look at his faded away face a graceless
A stooge a Scrooge stands a disgrace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jinal Oswal 12 March 2012

Indeed a liar cannot live a happy life... all the points presented here are true... The person indeed becomes a coward when he lies... But I do beleive there are some situations where in a lie is the only thing that can work.... I loved your poem... very beautifully penned...

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Mark Tachi 10 March 2012

This is cool...and it reveals some rare sense of humor!

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Aman Sa 09 March 2012

It is good poem on its own but your other poems impressed me more. i would like to cite reasons first of all the rhyming effect of which I am severely critic unless the poet convinces me that it was not for the sake of rhyming only. For when you are trying to reach a point of mystique sort, its in my opinion is better to give the primary importance in the thought it self.

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Unwritten Soul 09 March 2012

I agree in many of opinions here, it's a deep, clear and thoughtful write...It's been a log time i havent read from Aamit, glad found one here...but i hope the sensitivity should be more highlighted here, because we are in different faiths, yes we could be in this group or not..i mean the truth is really out there but the lie and confusion will make us live in mist...of course they will claimed what they believe as the best, i have no comment for that but let we back to the real discussion, the liar...sometimes we can give forgiveness for them to back and repented but if few times they wont change then we need to be careful...it's not difficult to see who lies who not, the closer you are to them the more real life of them you will know...It's all by souls image...remember my friend Wahab, liars come when selfish emerged_Unwritten Soul

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 March 2012

You have talked bout athe truth of the liars! Well written!

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Julie Schleppegrell 16 March 2012

Nice poem, The title was an good form of self submission. :)

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Ken E Hall 15 March 2012

A liar sewn up to the tee, sometimes a liar must be pitted. with all that weight around his neck tanks for sharing...regards

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Nuku Desmond 15 March 2012

Very well written poem.

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Crimson Soul 14 March 2012

Liars....There Are Too Many Truths Behind Their Lies, And So Little Of A lie Left In Their Wake. This Poem Gives That Glimpse. Very Nice.

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Malaya Roses 13 March 2012

Beautifully crafted words over the heinousness in the man with power. The damage is not all about abuse or power-monger but to the citizen who loves peace and want to live in secure environmental. Proven true... this type of bad-apple could not have peace or give peace... They are simple inevitable cancerous existence to human peace, liberty and humanity. Well done...! ! !

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