Connor Whyte

Freshman - 587 Points (March,30th,1993 / Montana)

Lies - Poem by Connor Whyte

The eyes of A lier show no truth, The eyes of a good lier fools those who are blind.

Seeking the truth when the devils your story, Bidding you farewell and letting you commit the sin and burn in hell, Your alone living with the lie you tell that you will only believe, You made a grave mistake.

Tick the time and start it back you can't change what you have done, Malevolent and untruthful you seek justice but you have no one to run to.

Your hated in the eyes of your family you would be lucky if the devil even wanted you, Your alone and in distress living your lies you can't confess.

Whats done is done I will never believe you even as your son, When you die no one will show nothing but the devils crow, You lay in your casket as it caves in, Someone likes you the maggots love your flesh your the feast of something I like even more than you.

You have payed your dues to commit sin you never prayed for forgiveness God cares but he can't do anything for you, You chose your path and turned the wrong way, Life is to short and you made it
that way.

Comments about Lies by Connor Whyte

  • Amanda Horton (7/7/2016 11:01:00 PM)

    So much truth in this I love it (Report) Reply

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  • (1/27/2016 2:01:00 AM)

    This poem title Lies, is a profound poem of intellectually. The eyes of a liar show no truth. Profound investigation of one's mentality through the light of the body. #10. (Report) Reply

  • (1/5/2016 7:08:00 AM)

    The eyes are like the mind, they can plat tricks on us. Greet poem. (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2013 5:05:00 PM)

    cantish rot; what a smug, self-righteous poem. And an artful lie. MM (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2013 3:24:00 PM)

    I have one of those two, were not born with the families we choose but we can live with the families we want (Report) Reply

  • ..... W@king Up..... (6/16/2013 12:41:00 AM)

    I like this poem... Perfect for poem of the day: D congrats!

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  • Jessel Jane Tevar Toring (1/1/2013 7:55:00 PM)

    I love the first paragraph most. You have your own way to poetry that defined you in some way. I can see you have so much more to share and form them to an art that's beautiful in those eyes that could understand your soul. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Lewis Peat (6/16/2012 3:05:00 PM)

    You are a magician. (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2012 12:22:00 PM)

    Awesome poem, although the bad spelling and grammar detracts from its potency. (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2012 2:26:00 AM)

    The sad cry from the member of a dysfunctional family, as one of the parents is the reason for creating such a havoc in the mind of this person. There are hundreds of thousands of families live such a life all over the world. Actually this kind of situation should not arise in another family, that is the reason I am writing poems on various social issues..Well written poem on Lies...My heart and prayers go to these people who suffer in silence! (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2012 10:05:00 AM)

    You have a very beautiful style of writing and you express yourself so deeply in this poem, I like it! (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2012 7:41:00 PM)

    So much hate and anger in this poem. I know life may be hard and we may not always agree with it but it's the way we look at it. If you see life with anger and hate then it's not gonna be pleasant at all.. But if you put the bad aside and see the good you may find that it's not all that bad. I really do like this poem though :) keep writting more :) can't wait to read your other poems :) (Report) Reply

  • (3/23/2012 7:56:00 PM)

    lies can be good and bad if you look at it from different perspectives. (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (3/23/2012 7:32:00 PM)

    Lies once discovered can have two side effects: One that would turns you angry and two: the one that would make you wiser. The first one is temporally and the second one is permanent. It seemed that you opted for the second one by writing this well crafted and poignant write! It is a thought provoking write that clearly shows your talent! Thank you for sharing! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-: NYC (Report) Reply

  • (3/23/2012 7:17:00 PM)

    Very unique style of writing. Truthful Lie Poem. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • (3/21/2012 12:43:00 PM)

    Wow! There is truth in your poem which makes me to read it again and again as gain in truth. Honestly a worthy poem to read.....

    My I invite you to read my limerick

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  • Brianna Winebarger (3/21/2012 7:23:00 AM)

    I will be honest and say that this isn't my favorite poem of yours but is still good. (Report) Reply

  • (3/20/2012 6:32:00 PM)

    A really great poem, really like it. A great write. (Report) Reply

  • (3/20/2012 6:17:00 PM)

    Wowz, interesting poem
    true, the lies we tell more likely stick with us to our grave... the lies that are told makes our lives shorter!
    magnificant poem
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 20, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, June 18, 2012

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