Life Poem by Jahan Zeb

Life

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Short or long,
Happy or sad,
To be enjoyed,
Or to be sad about,
Sitting idle,
Or busy like a bee,
Having no one,
Or be in mob,
In perfect order,
Or like a KG class,
Aiming high,
Or aimless,
Being liked,
Or rejected,
Sharing moments,
Or left alone,
Gifted,
Or deprived,
But you are mine,
my dear life,
I have to live you..

Jahanzeb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farah Ilyas 20 March 2012

well this is what? this is life & everyone have to live it or accept as it is, , , well beautiful composition great job Jahan Zaib Be Blessed

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Chinedu Dike 02 February 2020

A poignant bit of verse, well articulated and insightfully brought forth with conviction. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Bill Marcy 06 October 2012

Great write. Age-old message crafted skillfully.

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Shama Bukhari 15 September 2012

It's beautiful poem, Jahanzeb sahib...so real, so true.....so crystal clear vision about life.... Marvellous, keep up the good spirit of writing truthfully... all the best always.

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Aditi Khandelwal 24 March 2012

nice poem with a beautiful message... You have to live and love your life no matter what... Aditi

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Wahab Abdul 23 March 2012

very meaningful poem, expression is good, the style is fine.....it is the life of whatever kind we have live with it....nice saying.........i like it.

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