Life has its meanders and
Pitfalls
How could my love hide
All these before
Having fallen into those
Pitfalls
Now I trust and prefer
Wedlock that warns me of
Those pitfalls
Thanks to wedlock
As I'm a lotus now
Out of life's mire
Yet
You set out to
Earn money
Drowned in money power
You are there and there
I am here and here
Love has lost its crown
Moon's asking its sun
'How long, for how long
Poles apart should we be
Like this? '
Sun's doubting
'I'm giving her
Enough light..
What else she wants? '
Who can tell moon that
Sun is just a fire ball
With no heart
Who can tell moon that Sun is just a fire ball With no heart /// wise expression
Who can tell moon that Sun is just a fire ball With no heart A profound thought that needs real pondering! Life with its pitfalls, sometimes, has no answer.....A great poem Indira Ma'm of life's strange philosophy.......5 Stars
Your this brilliant poem makes us very emotional. Sun burns but moon reflects calmness. Heart beats to express love and care. Life is precious. Love cannot be hidden at all. This poem is very nicely and interestingly penned...5 stars..
Who can tell moon that Sun is just a fire ball With no heart....outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem on love and nature on a metaphorical base is amazingly delineated. Thank you dear madam for your brilliant imagery. Five stars.
A very meaningful write. Thanks for sharing. 'Who can tell moon that Sun is just a fire ball With no heart, '...is very nice. Loved it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Magnificent metophrical play rolling between sun and moon though different live in one space. This is life dispute all pitfalls overcomes and makes a way to live to the fullest. Really enjoyed ma'am. Thank-you so much.