Life Is But A Lovely Dream! ! Poem by Sandhya S.N

Life Is But A Lovely Dream! !

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60 years of Independence! !
Which venerated, vast victory
To liberate herself from white chains
To uplift herself to the skies;

60 years of development! !
In the field of human life
One could see it in the style;
We live our lives in festive mile

We have been a model for
Even for the far most ones
In the various field of life
In health, admin and literacy

Yet!
She is truly infamous! !
In the field of women abuse!
Even in the home as well;
As she is in midst of crowd!

All are generous in pop fuss
That they had came so.. forward
From the kitchen yard to field
And joined hands in all the fields

60 years are, sure milestones! !
Which changed a lot in our beside
Still we have a lack of space;
In and out and all the fields

We are visible in the rule! !
With a ratio one for three! !
But we don't have, that privilege! !
To use the power of half of one! !

We are proud to have a few
In the field of social life
They all shine as veterans in
As if representing us

But,
Don't feel jumping into the
Utter ending for the facts
That we too attained what we need
And we too are liberated ones

It is true that we had got
Enlighten power of alphabets! !
We are still seen standing behind
And striving hard to stand at front

We procured the book and work and
Kept it tight to our strong heart!
But we could not still be bought
Without the trays of bugs and gold! !

We are high-tech women in show
Using lipsticks and high heals
But we are intact at home (secret)
In the role of cook and maid

We too are much competent
To be creative while at work! !
But we can't even sit a while
Without a conscience of a lass! !

They don't feel a difference in
Age or color or any thing else;
But they see in lovely prey
Golden wings with, they could fly;

We are thoroughly eaten by
Stabbing eyes of those foxes;
Tear and crush our lovely parts
With their brutal eyes and minds;

No one find our strengthy heart
Powerful, loving, inventive;
Which could not be hunt at all
Even with a piercing sword;

Even now we are in war
With our hearts and minds so power!
Against the norms and feudal laws
Which always chain and only us! !

We are not at all pessimist;
To think as if our life in vain;
We too have a lovely dream!
Where we could also fly as well


Even then some times I feel! ! !
Life is but a lovely dream! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Rich with the rabid reality of restriction yet a compelling cry for equality and liberation. Thanks for sharing.

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June30 Tara 25 June 2009

What a superb expression of today’s women The outer boldness the inner fragility “We are thoroughly eaten by Stabbing eyes of those foxes Tear and crush our lovely parts With their brutal eyes and minds” These lines remind me of all the conferences, meetings, travels, shopping every place I had been… it’s not an easy mould to be in Love…Tara

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Nikunj Sharma 25 June 2009

We are not at all pessimist; To think as if our life in vain; We too have a lovely dream! Where we could also fly as well very nice poem Sandhya, written with lot of heart.... please read my poem called 'I AM THE BRIDGE ' and CAN I BE? .

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premji premji 09 March 2009

very powerful indeed.................

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Kesav Easwaran 09 March 2009

a write on indian women from one among them, on things as they see...no arguements over any...a powerful write...no doubt...10

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Seema Aarella 06 March 2009

The last lines says it all...its not a great task to survive in eden, but to live through a day in such a situation is an achievement....as long as that spirit survives life will always be a lovely dream, irrespective of surroundings! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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