Life Or Death Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

Life Or Death

Rating: 2.8


I inquired of him the best thing
to choose: life or death.
Without a beat, he whispered 'death'.
And so I shot him;
not because he chose another...
but because he was my life.

Friday, October 3, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: life,sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 03 October 2008

Compliments, very original, immediate. The spirit of a Latin epigram and a touch of femininity.

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Seema Chowdhury 23 November 2008

another nice one. keep composing.

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Sebastine Humaemo 12 December 2008

waa....nice one....just few lines but much meaning in it....thanks for sharing..

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Melvin Banggollay 25 August 2016

nice poem nice metaphor

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Ruby Muniz 06 December 2012

WOW [3 short yet powerful

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Nikunj Sharma 30 July 2009

One shot, one moment, One breath, between Life n death... Very nice poem..keep it up

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Nikunj Sharma 30 July 2009

One shot, one moment, One breath, between Life n death... Very nice poem..keep it up

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Paul Buttigieg 14 December 2008

Very Clever Jane..I love it

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