Life's Pain.... Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

Life's Pain....

Rating: 5.0


I am walking alone in the lonely rain
to hide my heart full of sorrows and pain
though no one can trace my tears in rain
I still use my hands to wipe it while crossing the vane
am going in search of my lovers tomb
to ask, when she will be back again in a mothers womb....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dark Gurl 55 19 January 2009

mMmmMmmM.. this poem sounds very sad to me lol, , buh i luv sad poems so yeh i luv urz too, , lol 10+

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Laila lili 15 January 2009

wonderful and realy great exprissions i like the most in your writing 10 ++++++++ Layla

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Vidi Writes 11 January 2009

Pains may be many... But way out are so many When a rain could hide your tears There will be a lightening To show you the way out. Lets not worry about Life's Pains Its part and parcel of life Lets learn from those pains The value of our Mothers Womb.

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Jeretha Van Niekerk 24 December 2008

gee! your pain is deeply felt, feel your need of lonliness Sebastine, excellently written keep it up. tc

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