Life's Play Poem by Sandra Feldman

Life's Play

Rating: 5.0


Life,
What is your secret?
Dawn,
Where is your light?
No matter how
We turn it,
We can't stop
Like in a play,
The final curtain
Of dark night
And the silence
That fills the roles
We once,
So proudly played.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 August 2019

A wonderful and perceptive write that all can relate to. The thought and the way it was conveyed will touch everybody's heart. So beautifully written.

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Sandra Feldman 11 August 2019

Thank you so much, dear Rose Marie. But your comment is written more beautifully. I appreciate it immensely! Thank you! ! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 August 2019

This one is quite significant, dear Ma’am Sandra...10+++

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Sandra Feldman 08 August 2019

Your words for my work are always so generously significant and thank you is never enough!

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Bill Cantrell 07 August 2019

Now you struck gold! ! ! I totally agree with Jane Campion..this could have been written by Shakespeare, mark my words...this will be poem of the day! Great poem Sandra! ! !

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Sandra Feldman 08 August 2019

Golden are your words for this poem. But Shakespeare and I could never be on the same level, very sweet of you to say so, as did Jane, but no way. You are always wishing me much more than I deserve and for that I am eternally grateful, for your terrific words and friendship, now and always!

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Jane Campion 07 August 2019

A well thought out poem. I love the way it is constructed. This could have been written by Shakespeare. To my favorites. Most of my poems center on life.

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Sandra Feldman 08 August 2019

Thank you so much for your exceptional words for this poem. When I read what you said about Shakespeare I was really speechless and more than surprised. And still, I don't know what to say, your immense comparison, took all my words away because the only thing Shakespeare and I have in common are the S, in Shakespeare and the s in sandra..Unforgettable moment, though!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 August 2019

This poem touches my heart! So well penned....10

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Sandra Feldman 08 August 2019

Dear Dillip, What a wonderful thing to say. And I know it is sincere. I appreciate it so much! Thank you!

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