Life,
What is your secret?
Dawn,
Where is your light?
No matter how
We turn it,
We can't stop
Like in a play,
The final curtain
Of dark night
And the silence
That fills the roles
We once,
So proudly played.
This one is quite significant, dear Ma’am Sandra...10+++
Your words for my work are always so generously significant and thank you is never enough!
Now you struck gold! ! ! I totally agree with Jane Campion..this could have been written by Shakespeare, mark my words...this will be poem of the day! Great poem Sandra! ! !
Golden are your words for this poem. But Shakespeare and I could never be on the same level, very sweet of you to say so, as did Jane, but no way. You are always wishing me much more than I deserve and for that I am eternally grateful, for your terrific words and friendship, now and always!
A well thought out poem. I love the way it is constructed. This could have been written by Shakespeare. To my favorites. Most of my poems center on life.
Thank you so much for your exceptional words for this poem. When I read what you said about Shakespeare I was really speechless and more than surprised. And still, I don't know what to say, your immense comparison, took all my words away because the only thing Shakespeare and I have in common are the S, in Shakespeare and the s in sandra..Unforgettable moment, though!
Dear Dillip, What a wonderful thing to say. And I know it is sincere. I appreciate it so much! Thank you!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A wonderful and perceptive write that all can relate to. The thought and the way it was conveyed will touch everybody's heart. So beautifully written.
Thank you so much, dear Rose Marie. But your comment is written more beautifully. I appreciate it immensely! Thank you! ! !