Wednesday, August 16, 2023

Life Still Goes On Comments

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This valley, this homeland where daffodils grow,
This place i grew up, that i call my own,
Those faces of loved ones are no longer here,
But life still goes on in this valley so dear.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Jayne Louise Davies 24 August 2023

Thank you so much everyone : ) I really appreciate your kind comments x

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 August 2023

Reliving those memories is a beautiful experience

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Kim Barney 22 August 2023

Congrats on member poem of the day, Jayne! Poem is very well done and deserves this honor.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 August 2023

CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as rhe Member Poem Of The Day by PoemHunter and Team.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 August 2023

The memories live on in this homeland of mine, finest poem ever told, though we are growing old, so the same rythm is told, that's why we'll never grow old

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 August 2023

A sweet reminiscence of childhood and the bygone times. The depiction of love of the poetess for her homeland is endearing: Those faces of loved ones are no longer here, But life still goes on in this valley so dear". This lovely poem is POD today! Many congratulations! !

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Nabakishore Dash 17 August 2023

Nicely depicted homeland memory.

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Jayne Louise Davies 22 August 2023

Thanks Nabakishore : ) I appreciate your comment x

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Cowboy Ron Williams 16 August 2023

Great poem, Jayne. There's no place like home.

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Jayne Louise Davies 22 August 2023

Thank you Ron : ) Much appreciated

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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