Jimmy Santiago Baca

(2 January 1952 / Santa Fe, New Mexico)

Like An Animal - Poem by Jimmy Santiago Baca

Behind the smooth texture
Of my eyes, way inside me,
A part of me has died:
I move my bloody fingernails
Across it, hard as a blackboard,
Run my fingers along it,
The chalk white scars
That say I AM SCARED,
Scared of what might become
Of me, the real me,
Behind these prison walls.

Comments about Like An Animal by Jimmy Santiago Baca

  • Sylvia Frances Chan (11/11/2018 3:53:00 AM)

    WOW. A greatest philosophical poem about the self. The metaphors are shouting and exploding. Fantastic short poem but powerful loaded and excellently worded. First of all my well meant CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as Modern Poem Of The Day, Hurray! Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem sheer brilliant poetry from your exploding inside. Submitted in 2003, My highest compliments, Jimmy Sir. GBU in Abundance, Amen (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/24/2018 11:05:00 PM)

    A great philosophical poem nicely executed. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (7/24/2018 11:20:00 AM)

    Our real self is caged inside our mind. Nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (7/24/2018 10:41:00 AM)

    The real me! !

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Glen Kappy (7/24/2018 7:32:00 AM)

    jimmy is an albuquerque, new mexico resident as i am. i've met him, read him, and know something of his story. the prison walls in this poem are probably literal—that's part of his story—as well, perhaps, as figurative. i don't have anything much to parallel his prison experience, and yet this poem strikes me with blunt force. i think again that baca is a natural poet—poetry just seems to flow right from him. -gk (Report) Reply

  • (7/24/2018 7:00:00 AM)

    Scared of what might become
    Of me, the real me, ...very fine poem searching for the Real I and what can become of it.. thank u. tony
    (Report) Reply

  • Adrian Flett (7/24/2018 4:33:00 AM)

    We are thinking animals and imprisoned in our minds, 'Behind these prison walls' (Report) Reply

  • Mahtab Bangalee (7/24/2018 12:44:00 AM)

    excellent introspection -

    A part of me has died:
    The chalk white scars
    That say I AM SCARED,
    Of me, the real me,
    Behind these prison walls.

    great writings
    (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (7/24/2018 12:37:00 AM)

    Our mind is imprisoned no matter where we are.++10 (Report) Reply

  • (2/16/2015 10:14:00 PM)

    This poem is short, but this is enough to convey the powerful mesage here told. The choice of words is suitable for the quickness of the thought, a thought of pain an future anxiety. You have done well here.

    Luis Estable
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  • Godfrey Morris (2/16/2015 8:52:00 PM)

    Lovely write great poem (Report) Reply

  • Smoky Hoss (2/16/2015 8:40:00 AM)

    A mental prison is perhaps the worst kind to fear. The hardest to escape. With words such as these, one attempts to tunnel out. (Report) Reply

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  • Kim Barney (2/16/2015 5:26:00 AM)

    Wow! This is intense! I've never been in a prison, but this seems very real. A well-written piece. (Report) Reply

  • (4/26/2009 11:05:00 PM)

    Only one that has walked in the shoes of a prisoner can identify with his or her poetry with the feeling of how it is behind the walls of a prison and i'm one of them, this is too real to deny or forget about it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 3, 2003

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