Like Cigarettes Poem by Ray Quesada

Like Cigarettes

Rating: 4.7


...Her complexity still lures suitors;
She goes through men like cigarettes
Savoring each puff
until her personality has burned them up
As if she was the Sun itself, and they,
like Icarus, got too close.
When she's done with them she smashes them
Along with their paper-mache self-images
Into an ashtray with a single destructive finger
Or flicks them onto the ground
...Or even shorts them,
and sets them aside somewhere
To finish later...
Always with the cool,
predatory, and mysterious
calm composure of
A real Lioness...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Honeytip 30 November 2012

I'm with Lyn! Great poem! Friends with a maneater are you? : -)

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Lyn Paul 30 November 2012

Hi Ray, do not like cigarettes but certainly LIKE your poem. Very clever. Curious if this is written with someone in mind.Thank You

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Maggie Munro 21 April 2013

Hey Ray, they all say they don't inhale, but you and I know better: P Love this piece, and hold my breath in readiness for your next offering x

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Terry O'leary 09 April 2013

Very nice... it's not good to smoke... and worse to get smoked...

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Nathan Hitchcock 12 December 2012

this is amazing! really well thought out, love the simerlies!

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Owain Glyn 01 December 2012

Good stuff, but smoking seriously damages your health! ! ! ! I shall read some more of your work.

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Red O'mara 01 December 2012

Fine poem, Ray. You told me once women were the only thing worth writing about. But don't ya love em?

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