Lilly Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Beautiful.............

Its sad cause shes dead, its spiritual and touching when she comes back to see her grandbaby smile I like it

This poem has and its beating..i love it

Your poetry speaks to me, I don't know why? but it's amazing. Keep up this talent

Awesome poem, heartfelt cogitations.

Very sweet, pen to paper, words to rhyme, amazing.

Very lovely poem.... as mystical really is possible to be feeling under or through the rainbows....10.. All the best Tsira

Hi Dave I'm Ronel from South Africa. Thanks for commenting on my poems. I enjoyed and identified with your poem Lilly. I think those who pass on let you see them when you are ready and worthy to do so-it brings peace and calm into our lives.

Hi. Dave, Truly speaking, That smile is graceful and precious enough to invite noble souls. wonderful presentation of a great feel in simple words.

Hi. Dave, Truly speaking, That smile is graceful and precious enough to invite noble souls. wonderful presentation of a great feel in simple words.