Limerick - 27 - Whirlwind Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

A limerick that seems to fulfill the criteria. Well penned.

Both are on dusty clothes laughing. yes, readers will also laugh,10 thanks for sharing

This is a very enjoyable limerick.

I could do no better in a second language.

A funny scene, beautifully displayed! Enjoyed the light humor of it!

I always enjoy reading your creations, it be poems, narrations or limericks. Limerick is an exceptional for you, I reckon, I can be wrong, but only consists of 5 lines and so well worded, dashingly rendered, I have enjoyed very much, Mr. Kumarmani. A 10 for the voting and much much more.. God's Blessings upon thee be Abundest. Thank you for sharing this hilarious limerick I have read with much pleasure.

Enjoyed the limerick.. Good one

A nice, humourous limerick Mr Mahakul. Thanks for sharing.

I can see them wheeling with whirl wind hurled dusty like a piece of garment now and then...they are young boys...everything is a sport for them, so they're enjoying themselves this way also....fun filled work - 10++

Whirlwind Tom and Pom on an outing one day On A dusty road... walking the way When the wind in a whirl spun them round all a-swirl And a dusty-clothed laughter held sway Here is the Canadian translation I find the reaction delightful Thank you my delightful old friend Wes Vogler (Old Dad)