Limerick- 6-Pound Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Limerick- 6-Pound
Once I saw Sahund moving round and round,
He was on bicycle, he was two hundred pounds
In the end of the field he fetched furious hound.
Bicycle was in speedy motion his heart pounds,
His hands slipped and thrashed with a sound.
Sahund - name of a boy
Pound - 454 grams or 0.454kg.
Hound - dog used in hunting
Pound - beat heavily
Superb Limerick, I liked it.....Blood hounds have dangerous appearance and anybody can get scared by mere looks.....
picture of Ramin Ara xWell said dear Kumarmani. 27 Sep 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Thomas A Robinson xI saw that on funniest home movies. 28 Sep 2015 by Thomas A Robinson | Reply picture of Gary Lee xlol...made me smile sir! 28 Sep 2015 by Gary Lee | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xHa what a fantastic write! Thank you for sharing: 0) 28 Sep 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE x ;) xoxoxo blessings 29 Sep 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of eleanor prince xyour posts are always such an education with the glossary too - startling imagery in this impactful poem and carries the theme well with much vigour and energy 29 Sep 2015 by eleanor prince | Reply picture of Asoke Kumar Mitra xvery nice write, so simple with natural beauty. 29 Sep 2015 by Asoke Kumar Mitra | Reply picture of Elizabeth Squires xGreat descriptive poem and much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. 30 Sep 2015 by Elizabeth Squires | Reply picture of Just Arun xI really like the format, ....the way you told your story then a bit of linguistic explanation and background. 30 Sep 2015 by Just Arun | Reply picture of words.... xHaha peddle dear boy peddle as fast as you can.wonderful pictures you paint :) 30 Sep 2015 by words.... | Reply picture of Harlan Hollenbeck xI enjoyed this a lot...thank you for doing the glossary at the end too 30 Sep 2015 by Harlan Hollenbeck | Reply picture of Lynda Robson xGreat limerick, thanks for the laughs.... 1 Oct 2015 by Lynda Robson | Reply picture of laura loveheart xHa ha, great! , tfs, [3 2 Oct 2015 by laura loveheart | Reply (all through PF)
You have produced a beautiful limerick more by the play of words with resonant sound effect! Poor Sahund..... a real 'gund'! Gund is a local usage in our area for a fat, 'round' person! Enjoyed.... not his fall, but the limerick!
Enjoyed this lovely funny Limerick.....................................
Sahund should either give up cycling or carry dog treats. : -)
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 9:56:09 PM # 1.0.0.1119
3 words of rhyme ound. could continue: and he fell on a mound.