Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 237,382 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Limerick -4-Chit-Chats - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Two friends were beneath a banyan tree,
They were in chit-chats in mind free.
First guy said, “Tree is so big fruit is small,
It is error of creator who has created all.”
Second pal said, “On your nose fruit is gonna fall.”

Topic(s) of this poem: gossip, nature

Comments about Limerick -4-Chit-Chats by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Perdita Young (3/7/2018 4:08:00 AM)

    Lol! Things shift to an unexpected direction and the standard of judgement will have to change.Enjoy reading it. (Report) Reply

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  • (3/6/2018 11:59:00 PM)

    So many would improve upon Creation- -those who can barely make a decent cup of coffee.
    An amusing, and meaningful, limerick!
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/11/2016 7:38:00 PM)

    Feedback received
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    xHahahaha wise pal! Enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing!
    5 Sep 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply

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    xLol funny tfs xoxoxo blessings my dear :))
    5 Sep 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply

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    x: 0) I loved it Kumarmani! Thank you for sharing!
    5 Sep 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply

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    xNice one.....! ! Its really nice. :)
    5 Sep 2015 by Salim R Javed | Reply

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    xHaha... that kind of dry sense is so funny.
    5 Sep 2015 by rain... | Reply

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    xBravo Sir.
    5 Sep 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

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    xVery funny, enjoyed this., :)
    6 Sep 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply

    picture of Prashant Shaurya
    xHaha, sweet limerick. Enjoyable read
    6 Sep 2015 by Prashant Shaurya | Reply

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    xImpressive limerick, Sir.
    9 Sep 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply

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    x.........this is good, and funny ★
    12 Sep 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply
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  • (9/8/2015 6:25:00 PM)

    Done with such great style and a quick wit. I really enjoyed the humour. Thanks for sharing this gem. (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (9/5/2015 10:08:00 PM)

    Great Limerick! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (9/2/2015 11:40:00 PM)

    Imagine if the fruit had been bigger! So everything has a plan! Interesting write! Enjoyed reading it! (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (9/1/2015 5:50:00 PM)

    I like the comical thought and story behind these words. (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/1/2015 9:05:00 AM)

    Truly, God has created everything knowing its perfection (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/1/2015 6:58:00 AM)

    Ha ha! what a message! wonderful limerick (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/31/2015 4:20:00 PM)

    Yes, an ant can kill an elephant.............................10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (8/31/2015 11:30:00 AM)

    The punishment for questioning.
    Nice limerick, Kumarmani
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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 31, 2015

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