Limerick- A Reply To Bri's Comment Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- A Reply To Bri's Comment

Rating: 4.9


"Shouldn't we observe our jubilee", asked Bri
"Shall we go out and have a turkey fry"?
In words as sharp as a knife,
Replied his angry wife.

".....Instead we shall remain here and cry! "





(Bri Edwards


how DID you get ahold of this photo of me and my wife! ? ?

last line, esp. combined with photo, gave me a good laugh! ! Ha Ha.

but in my situation, the roles are reversed: i'm the one who talks too much! !

to MyPoemList)

bri

Limerick- A Reply To Bri's Comment
Thursday, April 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: anniversary,celebration,limerick
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Below my limerick is given Bri's comment on my previous limerick- Anniversary Celebration. This is my reply to him!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 15 April 2019

if that's my wife in above photo, i'd grab her finger, twist it good, put it and others in her mouth, and spank her as a husband should! I guess i've taught Valsa all i know, about limericks and how to be funny, and now, in her limericks it does show: she's a star to admire, with many fans in tow. to MyPoemList bri :)

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Valsa George 17 April 2019

To Bri A husband's duty is not to spank Some do it when they're drunk Or when their head is blank They belong to an inferior rank! Fascinated by your humour and wit I badly longed for that gift I thought limericks would click Now they give me a real kick Of course you were my master Now limerick has become my anchor

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Bri Edwards 29 June 2019

dear Valsa, i've stumbled on this today while in N. Carolina library. how nice. i mean what you wrote above and below. however, things must be confused in India! ! ! ! of course a husband's job IS to spank his wife, whether she's been good or bad! ! ! and sometimes, if i see a husband here NOT spanking his wife, i do it for him! yes, i'm a helpful guy. bri :)

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A well balanced but befitting reply to Bri

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Khairul Ahsan 13 September 2020

Ha ha ha, loved Mrs. Bri's reaction in the poem and Mr. Bri's appreciation of the poem in the comments!

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Bri Edwards 29 June 2019

oh, i guess i already sent it to MyPoemList. :))))))))))))

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Valsa George 01 July 2019

Hi Bri Thank you again and again.......! !

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Bri Edwards 29 June 2019

your poem to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Susan Williams 08 June 2019

Enjoyed this immensely! ! ! Thank you for giving me a giggle today! ! ! ! Smoothly done!

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Mj Lemon 28 May 2019

I don't know how I missed this one earlier....a great laugh is always the ideal way to start a perfect day. Most excellent, Valsa!

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