M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,492 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Limerick - Hands Up. - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

There lived a squirrel in India
To gain power of jungle appeared an idea
And he made all false promises
Banking on it started accumulating nuts of choices
Ants realized his intentions and dragged him to media.

Topic(s) of this poem: political humor

Form: Limerick


Comments about Limerick - Hands Up. by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/13/2015 9:13:00 AM)


    Witty n funny............10 for this Asim. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/13/2015 3:31:00 AM)


    The politicians in my country are doing the same but with money
    thanks Asim-10
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/13/2015 10:40:00 PM)

    Ya I agree no country is untouched by corruption. Thanks much.

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/13/2015 1:31:00 AM)


    An amazing and funny imagery is drawn here with wise sense to gain power of jungle as appeared in an idea. Wise sharing...10 (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/13/2015 10:40:00 PM)

    Learning the art of writing limericks.Thanks much.

  • Kelly Kurt (11/13/2015 12:36:00 AM)


    Very funny, great pic. Thanks (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/13/2015 10:39:00 PM)

    Thanks much Just a try Sir....

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 12, 2015



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