Limerick: No Windows Needed Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Limerick: No Windows Needed

Rating: 5.0

How marvelous is the kangaroo
whose child, while inside, plays peekaboo!
Little joey, no slouch,
pokes his head from the pouch.
Could we call that a womb with a view?

Limerick: No Windows Needed
Friday, October 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: child,fun,limerick
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written and posted 12 October 2018
Deleted and re-posted 19 October 2018 to eliminate the soundtrack added by PH
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diana Van Den Berg 23 December 2018

NOW, having seen the explanation, i get what you are doing! ! ! I read several of your poems - or rather the poem notes and thought that the square poem was supposed to be the gibberish in the real place for the poem. Giggles at your poem and what a gorgeous pair of models yuo had for the photo! :)

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Kim Barney 26 December 2018

Thanks for the comment, Diana. Much appreciated.

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Rebecca Navarre 12 December 2018

Awesome! ..Beautiful imagery, with beautiful flow that brings smiles! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Kim Barney 14 December 2018

Thank you, Rebecca. Your comment is truly appreciated.

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wes vogler 24 October 2018

Great one Kim..... womb with a view

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Kim Barney 31 October 2018

Thanks, Wes. Thought you'd like it.

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Spock The Vegan 20 October 2018

Great limerick, Kim. I see you're very inventive to solve problems too.

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Kim Barney 20 October 2018

Thanks, Spock. Sometimes ya gotta do whatcha gotta do.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 October 2018

Kim, such a splendid limerick....10++++++++++++

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Kim Barney 20 October 2018

Obrigado, Bernard. I appreciate the comment.

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