M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,552 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Limerick - Old Age - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Enough of going for prey
Now our hairs have grown grey
Let us device something like selfie
So that our prey will come in felfie
We can relax together in array

Topic(s) of this poem: life, limerick

Form: Limerick

Comments about Limerick - Old Age by M. Asim Nehal

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/30/2015 11:04:00 PM)

    An interesting poem, enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/30/2015 8:13:00 AM)

    Superb Limerick man, enjoyable. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (11/30/2015 1:24:00 AM)

    Will your 'felfie' also soon find a place in everyday vocabulary like the selfie, Asim? Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (11/29/2015 11:32:00 PM)

    Verily, age makes us weak in body but experience
    treasures the wisdom
    (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/29/2015 5:26:00 PM)

    Very amazing Limerick shared here definitely. We can relax together in array with wise selfie.10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/29/2015 5:11:00 PM)

    **The wisdom of age is earned with grey hairs.: -) Thanks, Mohammed (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/29/2015 5:10:00 PM)

    The wisdom of age is earned with grey hairs.: -) Thanks, Mohammed (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/29/2015 1:00:00 PM)

    Wow! ! The king of jungle planning to use latest technology for a hassle free and comfortable life in old age. What a wild idea! Enjoyed it's humour. Thank you, Md. Asim ji. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 29, 2015

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