Limerick R3 (Hindi) Three Little Birds Comments

i'll take this from MyPoemList to use now in August's showcase. Thanks. bri :)

But they felt they were doing them good. great compose and laugher, thank you for sharing the poem with us,10

A cute limerick... I am sure your Hindi translation would be equally sweet!

Rich in realism is this short but substantive sumission.

Feel to be good, is the best, nice thought

With the respect of nature! Nice work.

well, i laughed at the end of the 'anonymous' English version. BUT no matter how many times i read over the Hindi version, i could never make head nor tails out of it! ! : ( :) :) I'll send to MyPoemList.

Kya baat hai....Bahut badiya limerick hai..10