Limerick R3 (Hindi) Three Little Birds Poem by Rajnish Manga

Limerick R3 (Hindi) Three Little Birds

Rating: 5.0

There were three little birds in a wood,
Who always sang hymns when they could,

What the words were about
They could never make out.

But they felt they were doing them good.

(Anonymous)



छोटे से इक जंगल में थे तीन मुर्ग़ रहा करते,
यहाँ वहां बैठे उड़ते वो मंत्रोच्चार किया करते,

मन्त्रों में क्या लिक्खा था,
उनको कभी न दिक्खा था,

पर लगता ये मन्त्र सदा सबका भला किया करते.

(अनुवाद/ रजनीश मंगा)

Friday, December 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: bird,forest,good,woods
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 10 October 2015

Kya baat hai....Bahut badiya limerick hai..10

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Rajnish Manga 12 October 2015

Thank you, M. Asim ji, for appreciating my effort.

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Bri Edwards 23 November 2015

well, i laughed at the end of the 'anonymous' English version. BUT no matter how many times i read over the Hindi version, i could never make head nor tails out of it! ! : ( :) :) I'll send to MyPoemList.

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Bri Edwards 28 July 2017

i'll take this from MyPoemList to use now in August's showcase. Thanks. bri :)

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Rajnish Manga 29 July 2017

To be a part of this showcase is definitely an approval of its class. Thanks for your kind words, Sir.

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Muzahidul Reza 24 May 2017

But they felt they were doing them good. great compose and laugher, thank you for sharing the poem with us,10

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Rajnish Manga 24 May 2017

Thanks for being on this page and for sharing your views about the poem (Limerick R3 (Hindi) Three Little Birds) .

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Valsa George 14 August 2016

A cute limerick... I am sure your Hindi translation would be equally sweet!

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Rich in realism is this short but substantive sumission.

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Feel to be good, is the best, nice thought

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Rajnish Manga

Rajnish Manga

Meerut / Now at Faridabad
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