Limerick- (Serious) Tips For Happy Living! Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- (Serious) Tips For Happy Living!

Rating: 5.0

If you are in good company, bask
If you land up in bad company, pack
Lofty thoughts, always nourish
Little joys, ever relish
On defeated, fail not to bounce back!

Thursday, March 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick
Simple thoughts to make life happy written in the format of a limerick!
Loke Kok Yee 10 March 2018

You have written good advice So I had to read it twice Lofty thoughts they shy from me For I'm simple as can be And my friends they are so nice Thanks Valsa

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Valsa George 10 March 2018

Thanks a lot Loke...! . Love reading your response, always! I have been trying to give some insight That would help our lives become bright Glad you read it twice And felt they are nice However, please don't see it as advice!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 March 2018

Sorry, due to some technical issues I am not able to vote! I will vote it later

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Valsa George 12 March 2018

Rating is not so important, Dillip! By reading this and commenting on it, you have done me honor!

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Bri Edwards 10 March 2018

not bad, my friend, but i'd use If, not On at start of last line. of course, it is 'just my idea'. to MyPoemList bri :) p.s. i think people have a harder time bouncing back than a rubber ball has! but being a person may be more interesting than being a ball.

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Doug Bentley 27 November 2018

it's a nightmare. i couldn't leave an old fool/buffoon hanging alone and i'm the only one i could find. when i post a comment, you get an email. then, read the comment. that is demanding a lot of charity from someone so special. not to waste your valuable time with a trivial, self-serving comment...i'll forward both our concerns to keep writing!

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Akhtar Jawad 30 May 2018

A great Limerick with a valuable message for all. Liked it as a change in style and liked its lovely rimes.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 March 2018

A clever write in its simplicity. Amazing advice for a joyful life. Well executed piece.10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 March 2018

Great advice in lines so simple. It will be a joy to follow this and feel happy.

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Mihaela Pirjol 13 March 2018

Wise thoughts with wise decisions. The path to happiness is the decisions we make.

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