///Listen To Thyself Poem by akram saqib

///Listen To Thyself

Rating: 4.1


O! Trainer master
I am the king
This is crown prince
Make his mind waster

Manners of court
He has learnt
Strengthen him so
To make invincible fort

O thy lordship
I would surely do
All my best
With greater hardship
Master trainer to the prince commands

O the prince make hustle
Go to the dense forest
Listen in quietness
What the leaves rustle

Do report back
The voices quiet
I’ll make up
If something lack

PRINE
I spent days a lot
In chasing vices
Perused them closely
But understood them not

MASTER
Go again and now
Listen with great care
What quietness says?
And report me back so
PRINCE
O master I have returned
With a lesson that I learnt
The way of esteem and respect
I’ve from loneliness earned

The success of a man lies
In the sounds that vies
With the conscience
In the deep deep silence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amir Amzah 29 May 2009

well i can say that this is a unique poem u have created... amazing! ! ! ! one thing i like about this poem of urs is, u could turn it to a play.. well no bet 10points for this poem. a gd write from u. well done

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

'The success of a man lies In the sounds that vies With the conscience In the deep deep silence' Delighted with this beautiful idea.10

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Anna jonson 31 May 2009

the last part is more than beautiful..good poem...

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Obinna Eruchie 01 June 2009

listen to thyself to know thy success. good verse.

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Ejaz Khan 02 June 2009

Well written! The old saying that the mind is the slayer..... holds even today. The voice of silence is indeed the most potent sound. Greetings for writing such a beautiful poem.10++

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Shams Tahir 22 June 2009

real listening is listening of oneself

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A beautiful poem well penned.10.

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Rafique Farooqi 15 June 2009

it is also your wonderful write......

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Noha El3wdy 08 June 2009

hearing silence............... its a cure to the mind. well writen great.

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Aijaz Asif 02 June 2009

so true and i myself thinks that sound of silence is the most beautiful sound in the universe...another great write from you sir,10+++ and thanks for sharing rgds asif

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