Little crystal dewdrop
Trembling daughter of the morning,
On the tip of a leaf of thyme
What are you doing on the hill?
Before the flower, before the bird,
Before the awakening of the dawn,
When the valley still sleeps
What are you doing on the hill?
A nice creation, well conceived and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Reva.
A very elegant little poem! Loved the poetic expression! Liked the second stanza most! ......10
When the valley still sleeps What are you doing on the hill? Wow, a nice drop of dew on the soft heart of the reader too, so nicely placed. You are superb. Thanks for the sharing this lovely poem dear Reva. 10+++++