Two hearts tossed
Into a vast valley -
Waiting on a hilltop
For clouds to appear
Tormented
Longing for a tempest
To snatch the souls
Transforming them
Into white clouds
Of two spirits -
Clouds arrived early
Bleak, hopeless and desolate.
A sweet song of the soul well knitted. Thanks Reva for the beautiful poem shared. 10+++
Lovely little poem! Brief but highly expressive! Loved your expression: Two hearts tossed Into a vast valley -/Waiting on a hilltop/For clouds to appear.....I vote it with a 10
Really an insightful depiction of the whimsical and temperamental nature of love. Thanks for sharing Reva.