# Live Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
# Live
[ a conversation with god]
In JUST a word tell me..i asked
what do i do?
god just said 'LIVE'
In JUST a word tell me..i asked
what do i do to attain you?
god went on to say the same 'LIVE'
what is this? ..me
am i not living?
may be not he said
you are either scheming...living the future
or brooding...living the past
you are an assimilation of the dead and gone
iam ever a new born
you are never with me at the moment
YOU ONLY THINK YOU ARE LIVING
have you ever seen the wind..he went on
can i? ...(me)
why don't you try? ...(him)
how do i? ...(me)
god went on to say the same again...
'LIVE'
WILL I EVER 'LIVE' TO SEE THE WIND....i thought
We can't see the wind but only feel it. Subtler elements can only be expereienced and God is very very sublte. Such experiences can't be properly expressed in so many words either. Subtle means it can contain the gross. Words fail for a proper expression. 'Yadho vaacho nivarthanthe, aprapya manasa saha...' 'Live in the present ' is what all philosophers finally say but human mind hovers around the Past and Future. It is not the problem of God but only that of man.
yes, we all need to live...we all moved away from living!
Excellent write, nicely composed. I love the last line most. 10+++
you asked the right question, and was given the right answer. A BEAUTIFUL WRITE A TEN
GOD the almighty, the powerful and the creator of the first beginning..grace
a really beautiful poem with a good message. live not just exist to attain Him.. 10 Mamta
this is a bEautiful poem.so simple but with agreat message.a 10 from me
God gave us the freedom to live, but we are misusing the same. He gave us wind, water, fire, space and earth to live, what more is required for a peaceful living?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 10:48:32 PM # 1.0.0
a good philosophical poem; insightful...