Lives Trapped In The Cave: ชีวิตติดในถ้ำ Poem by Prayad Brian Pantasri

Lives Trapped In The Cave: ชีวิตติดในถ้ำ

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Hello! we've been trying to send you a wave
We have long been trapped in the cave
It's surrounding by the water
Indeed, over here is darker
Thank you so much for resecuring us to the safe.
(Brian P.)

ติดในถ้ำค่ำเช้าคอยคนช่วย
น้ำท่วมด้วยมืดมนทนท้องหิว
แต่ปลอดภัยชีวิตไม่ปลิดปลิว
สูงสุดลิ่วเหนือเกล้ากล่าวขอบคุณ
(3/7/2018)

Lives Trapped In The Cave: ชีวิตติดในถ้ำ
Wednesday, July 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,safe,security,wave
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 09 July 2018

Ulysses journey obstructed by Poseidon! Sportive mind and child (senryu) nice writings

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Rajnish Manga 09 July 2018

The poem carries with it the sentiments of those trapped, those trying desperately to rescue them out and the entire world anxiously watching this challenging rescue operation and praying for its success. Thanks for capturing this historic moment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 July 2018

Trapped in the cave! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 July 2018

Every day we are reading about you.... now the U: S is also helping out to rescue you dear friends.. have courage., God is with you. so many good willing people are trying to get you out of the cave. have courage. thank u for this poem. tony

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Adrian Flett 09 July 2018

One by one they're bringing them to safety

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Chinedu Dike 06 June 2019

A witty rendition nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, Prayad.

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Richard Wlodarski 09 July 2018

God works in mysterious ways. This prayerful poem is a gentle reminder. Congratulations on a well deserved Poem Of The Day!

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Akhtar Jawad 09 July 2018

A wonderful poem, I congratulate you.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 July 2018

A poem on an accident and rescue efforts, well in time, a well deserved selection as member's poem.

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Lyn Paul 09 July 2018

A miracle it is. 8 now rescued, not forgetting the rescuer who lost his life. The world is watching.

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