Living In A World Of Our Own Poem by Gert Strydom

Living In A World Of Our Own

Rating: 4.2


How long ago has it been, since the day
that you wore a red dress
outside that glass citadel
where the hopes and dreams of nations
are lost in?

It somehow made you look so utterly young,
so alive and the wind made your blonde hair
look wild, giving you an untamed look
at the small fountain of the United Nations

the sun was so very bright,
that even the sunglasses
wasn’t enough to dim the light

and the boats sailing on the river,
was somewhat romantic
if you can find that kind of thing
anywhere in that busy America
with cars shattering the peace,
travelling by at speed

and it had been a really great day
with us living in a world of our own.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 16 September 2016

Well done, Gert. Thanks for sharing and congrats on poem of the day

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Seamus O Brian 16 September 2016

Congratulations on having your work chosen as Poem of the Day! Well done. :)

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John Richter 16 September 2016

I like this... peaceful day... interupted

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Tom Billsborough 16 September 2016

A beautiful cameo from your memories. As Edward has said, so alive. And the descriptive power amazing. This poem is going into my favourites' list! Well done on poem of the day. Richly deserved.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2016

So alive! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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