Llama Drama Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

Llama Drama

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This flesh 'n' blood cousin of the ship 'o' the desert
here is given that funky punky, stylish haircut?
Could it be optical illusion or screen manipulation
causing him to grin in mock jubilation?

And ain't he gonna toss those bangs
like some real groovy llama?
My doesn't he look ready for any
showbiz dromedary drama?

Ah yes, he does look handsome, do come have a view
of this fuzzy, comedy dromedary beau!

Send in the paparazzi, for he's already saying cheese
But he prefers his own kind, send in some lady llamas please.

Hey, like humans, llamas can stick their tongues out
and spit to express displeasure
So keep your distance from angry ones
or you will regret the mismeasure.

It's scientific pseudonym is llama glama
Think of glamour? Ah, spare the poor llama.

The one in the picture is a cool llama teenager
but he's no teeny-bopper, for he's a teetotaller
as no one ever saw him with a bottle of gin or lager!

Llama Drama
Thursday, May 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: animals
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 12 May 2019

Very funny! I love the way you play with words and let them take you places. Cool pictures too. What made you think of Llamas? Once here in Prague I passed a house that sometimes has exotic animals, and there in the garden stood two llamas!

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YOU NEED TWO FOR ANYTHING SINGLY YOU CAN'T DO

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bri edwards 13 May 2019

1 - i esp. enjoy displeasure/mismeasure for the meaning and the rhyme, though i think you've used poetic license rather than the noun: mismeasurement. i'm also not sure if photos are all of llamas, or if some, at least, are alpacas. i don't trust all photos found when using Google. (see # 2 comment) " but he's no teeny-bopper" ..i don't know why you put this information here. :) bri

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bri edwards 13 May 2019

2 - i like alliteration: " dromedary drama" , but: " Camelid. Camelids are members of the biological family Camelidae, the only currently living family in the suborder Tylopoda. The extant members of this group are: dromedary camels, Bactrian camels, wild Bactrian camels, llamas, alpacas, vicuñas, and guanacos."

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bri edwards 13 May 2019

3 - i agree with use of 'n', but i'd use o', not 'o'. ;) [i am not grammar expert! ] i, also, like/prefer " my kind" , but don't ask what kind i AM! the jury is 'still out'. bri :)

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Susan Williams 08 March 2020

hahahahahahahahahaha I love the gentle sense of humor unleashed herein! ! ! They have such an individual appearance running from comic to elegant and you give full respect to all!

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Nkululeko Mdudu 18 January 2020

cool rhythm and rhyme piece

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 October 2019

.... Because Google confused me more than clarify as to what exactly make one an Arabian sonnet.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 October 2019

Something drew me to this beautiful piece, and I saw that the poem is called Arabian sonnet. Can you give some more info on this poetry type. Thanks

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 October 2019

Something drew me here again to this beautiful piece, and I saw, the poem is called Arabian sonnet. Can you also educate me with some more details. Thanks.

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