~ Lo: Gotten Divine ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Neat nifty Ohh lofty Full of benign Soused in Divine! 10++ dr.sakti

I like your rhymes and your innovative poetic vision. Take care, Warmest regards, Sandra

your play of words can be heard.

Cute Beaut and beau ideal Your uncanny way to make complex a simple we enjoy always… wonderful hobnobbing of words….into the full octave... 10+

Your poems always carry a hidden meaning. See the face of a drug addict as he converses with the divine. I remember a story; in a village a person lost one of his eyes. People began to call him kana. One day he thought why not a village of Kana's; so he said he could see the divine. a person with little mind blinded his one eye but when he did not see the divine he wanted to say no Divine. The first kana said don't be a fool and say you see him or just the two of us will be called kana's. Well he and the others to follow were so eloquent that the whole village became a village of kana's except one. Poor fell later became one for he could not stand to be call a non Kana. Hope the world does not become full of addicts.

Spiritual upliftment of the greatest order. This outta be the medicine for self awakening. THanks for sharing

‘One hundred percent benign… Lookin’ for Divine Zeroing canine Poetry sublime’ 10++

A wee poem that carries a mighty impact. A good write. Lynn

Indeed a dip-deep and profound poem … Highly symbolic Canine = Animal Instinct Malign =Evil or harmful Benign = Pleasant and beneficial [humane instinct] Finally DIVINITY Whaoo beautiful Voted 10+

A poetic sojourn from low instinct to Highest Instinct Power packed message in just wee capsules like latest generation antibiotics to kill bacterias [Canine]..life saving …life giving too 10+++ Dr. V.