Lollipop Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Lollipop

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Lollipop is one type of sweet on a small stick,
Lolly is like lollipop, children eat, enjoy and flick.
Lonely life is painful children feel well,
Lollipop can avoid loneliness together they dwell.

Loftiness arises among children when they play,
Lovely dolls they make from water, stick and clay.
Like clay model the children are to be judged,
Luminous steps should be taken nothing be caused.

Lure must be acquired by guardian and the teacher,
Lusciously they must treat, children oughtn’t to torture.
Lollipop should be their tongue, should have sweet voice,
Lousy attitude shouldn’t be they must have right choice.

Lucidity is always good; parents should look upon this,
Lovingly they should guide their children without any hiss.
Love to God, love to country parents should teach,
Loveless life is like a desert it brings pain to each.

Lovely are the children, lovely are flowers and parent,
Lovely are countries, environment and persons inherent.
Love we must seek we must love to all,
Leap should be taken for shake off emotion’s fall.

Monday, August 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood ,chocolate,life,lifestyle
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Children like lollipop, they eat, enjoy and then read books. They turn over pages of the book rapidly. Children feel loneliness. Lollipop removes loneliness because children gather to eat lollipop. When the children play loftiness arises among them. They make lovely dolls with mud, water, stick and cloth etc. Children are like clay model. So they should be handled carefully. Guardians must have enticing quality. They should treat children sweetly. They should not have lousy attitude. Children should earn to love God, country and people with nature. They should be careful for the shake off the emotion’s fall. This is the theme of the poem in nutshell. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 24 August 2015

Lovely are the children, lovely are flowers and parent, Lovely are countries, environment and persons inherent. Love we must seek we must love to all, Leap should be taken for shake off emotion’s fall. What a lovely poem! ..........................10

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David Wood 24 August 2015

Children are the future of the world and should be cherished, loved and educated to take over where we left off. Lovely poem I really enjoyed reading.

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Kelly Kurt 24 August 2015

A lovely poem by a gifted thinker and poet

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Valsa George 26 August 2015

'Love to God, love to country parents should teach, Loveless life is like a desert it brings pain to each'............. Very meaningful lines! Enjoyed the poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Salim R Javed xLovely piece... :) 24 Aug 2015 by Salim R Javed | Reply picture of Rohan ******* xbeautiful and a yummy piece sir... 24 Aug 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xvery nice poem 24 Aug 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xWell composed, Sir, Thank you. 25 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Mfena Ortswen xNice one, Kumarmani. 25 Aug 2015 by Mfena Ortswen | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xA whimsical enchanting write! 25 Aug 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of Gary Lee xexcellent...a true artist 25 Aug 2015 by Gary Lee | Reply

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Designed with starting 'L', children's with lollipop, enjoyed well,

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 September 2015

Lonley life is painful. That's really the truth. Thank you.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2015

Lollipop is loved by all. Let love be shared by all. Beautiful message delivered through the poem. Thank you.

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* Sunprincess * 26 August 2015

..............nice poem...thank you for sharing ★ Love we must seek we must love to all

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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