Loneliness Poem by Rini Shibu

Loneliness

Rating: 4.7


When you are in the midst of darkness
Where loneliness engulfs your soul
Twinges of hopelessness felt
Chirping sound of crickets heard
The only sound to break the silence
Open the window of your heart
To see the magic in your backyard
The most fascinating view on earth
Hundreds of shimmering fireflies
The glowing lights in the dark
Millions of twinkling stars in the sky
Like diamonds on black carpet
And you are the shining moon in darkness
To spread the light around.

Loneliness
Tuesday, May 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 June 2017

Poetry is beauty only if you can edit it... Why have all first letters in caps I wonder poet tree your poetry is lonely

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Rini Shibu 16 June 2017

Hi poet, thanks for reading my poem, I appreciate your comments..what matters is the content not caps or small letters. :) cheers

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 June 2017

Sorry to state, A Comment in bad taste! ! ! !

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 June 2017

sorry here perhaps all want praise My idea was one to help how this to erase do tell

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Rob Lamberton 26 March 2023

Sometimes we are not as lonely as we think we are. We just need to open our euro what's around us!

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Rob Lamberton 13 July 2023

Eyes

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Rob Lamberton 17 January 2023

I like how your poem on loneliness turns into a solution!

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KAVIN CHARALAN 05 February 2021

Bravo beautifully written poem

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Susan Williams 24 January 2021

open the windows of your heart! a lovely invitation to enjoy the world created for man --- top marks

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Dr. Antony Theodore 19 January 2021

Hundreds of shimmering fireflies The glowing lights in the dark Millions of twinkling stars in the sky Like diamonds on black carpet... this is a wonderful poem dear Rini and a great graphic too.

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