Loneliness Poem by Leonard Dabydeen

Loneliness

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She creeps around my room
lulling any sound whispering
in the creak of my chair
or the opening of a cabinet
watching and listening
like a hawk perched for flight
then she comes into my mind
with a hug and a kiss
loving me for who I am
and who I want to be
or who I have become
then she tickles me
in the vulnerability of my soul
stirring me into life
and I begin to let my keyboard play
like a piano of my dreams
as I play a song for her to sleep
while I sift through my world
like a spider’s web
trapped in the loneliness
of bountiful joy and happiness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lalitha iyer 27 May 2010

your loneliness unlike mine is not dull and drab and gloomy but very well sketched and appears to be appealing.....................

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Ash P 27 May 2010

hmmm....wow....i like! ! ! ...its as if i can see it playing out in front of me...as i read..vivid.

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Paul Judges 27 May 2010

Well composed piece, Leonard

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Bijay Kant Dubey 29 January 2019

Loneliness, how to describe it? What is that it is composed of, that it constitutes it?

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Liza Sudina 19 June 2017

What a touchy beautiful musical poem! What tenderness of a lullaby!

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2016

Like a hawk perched for flight! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Howard Savage 05 January 2016

This is a very clever Poem, loneness is defined as a female. Great construction.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 27 May 2010

This is like saying 'I can never be alone with my solitude....'...wow leonard! ! ! ....your loneliness or rather should I say your 'Aloneness' is sparkling...Few of us are as blessed as you are....never read a more joyous poem on loneliness :))) Sri.

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