What a lonely girl
She sits in the corner
Lives in the world
No one there beside her
What a lonely girl
She doesn’t even stir
No longer does she dwell
On her past, just the future
What a lonely girl
The only man in her life gone
And how her heart fell
Now she has no one
What a lonely girl
She lives, breathes and sleeps
Her dreams make her swirl
But when she wakes, she weeps
Standing by the shore
Speaking in her husked tone
She doesn’t hold back anymore
“Why am I alone? ”
As the saying goes there are plenty more fish in that sea (by that 'shore' of yours) , especially if you've not lied about your date of birth. Well constructed verses.
beautiful stanz with very well written with repeated lines...keep writing
wow this has actualy tuched my heart that i have kept coverd for so long
I don't believe that you've lied about your date of birth. You seem to have a talent. I keep the rating asside (9) to see also other good poems like this. Go ahead, dear
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
no one is alone even being lonerly the whole world still smiles with you yet painful by the reeks of alienation the nature stilllove you by its silence..............excellent expression of lonliness by the self as when deferred by time, yet tomorrow is the day of hope, sun certainly rise tomorrow to cater to the needs of your warmth, wrouht ingenious,10+, thanks for sharing